- The lighting needs to be the same in every shot some shots appear to be darker than others.
- In some scenes there are shots of people in the corner of the screen.
- Eye contact with the camera - a bit strange.
- Liked that there are a number of shots and angles used.
Friends: Ages between 15 and 19
- Similar points to the above plus suggest that the ending could be a bit better.
- Should show some anger as well as emotions of loss.
- likes that we have used point of view shots.
We had a long discussion on your filming. The biggest problem was your lighting and this is something you need to have a discussion about - maybe upload some of the problematic footage onto your blog. Your camera was trying to cope with huge expeanses of light behind your character - the result being silhouettes.
ReplyDeleteSome of your framing was also a little loose - tops of subjects needed to be nearer the top of the frame.