Priya Ahluwalia, Maiken Davidson and Rachael Saunders
There is a problem with the text - it is very difficult to read against such a busy background. Can you read 13th April against a black top?Look closely at other revies and how they appear on posters. Your font is too big. It is the comment as opposed to the cource that is important.The comments need to be justified.You need a boxed age ratingOverall, it perhaps resembles a mag front cover. Perhapds if you experimented with landscaping it instead?
There is a problem with the text - it is very difficult to read against such a busy background. Can you read 13th April against a black top?
ReplyDeleteLook closely at other revies and how they appear on posters. Your font is too big. It is the comment as opposed to the cource that is important.
The comments need to be justified.
You need a boxed age rating
Overall, it perhaps resembles a mag front cover. Perhapds if you experimented with landscaping it instead?